Nowadays the society is very diversified
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either
may be starving themselves to get an attractive body, but
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overweight is
increasing,
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leading to
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increase
ofChange preposition
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the number of
who are at risk of serious health problems.
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fast pacedUse the right word
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world,
may be a prominent factor
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leading to eating
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becomeWrong verb form
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overeating
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thatCorrect pronoun usage
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leadCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to
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and
resultCorrect subject-verb agreement
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in serious health
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. There may be different kinds of stressors, like
, family, study, finance and relationships.
are not having
-life balance because the
is too stressful and demands much care, effort
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overworkload
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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very common. Snacks are
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convenient
waysFix the agreement mistake
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to solve
problem, to ease the
and be more fun to be at
or study during
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long time boring
.
To solve
problem, it is crucial to have a good
-life balance. Snacks could be taken, but
has to be implemented. And as
is the main focus, meditation or deep
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areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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encouraged to refresh the mind and to uplift
spiritCorrect article usage
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, and workers may fully
utilizeChange the spelling
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their lunch time or toilet breaks for a stretch with a deep breath, or a short walk or sleep
of focusing on their mobile phones.
, some may lack motivation for exercise and
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lazy for workouts, and they are too busy being addicted to the
internetsFix the agreement mistake
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, browsing different social
mediasFix the agreement mistake
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.
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discipline is
recommended to build a healthy lifestyle, eating less on the couch
browsing the
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, and
goWrong verb form
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out more for fresh air. They are
encouraged to take some sport classes or get some friends to increase their motivation for exercising
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someone would monitor and accompany them for exercising,
so Change preposition
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they would have more fun interacting with
, or they can
join some clubs to exercise alone if they are shy to
out with others.
For the above problems, they should know and acknowledge their problems first and
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set goals
to solve
itCorrect pronoun usage
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.
, a
-life balance with a healthy mindset and living style
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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crucial to build a healthy body, with discipline and determination to eat less, and get friends or classes for exercising, and find their ways of relieving
.