The charts below show the survey results for which environmental problems people in 3 countries are most concerned about.

The charts below show the survey results for which environmental problems people in 3 countries are most concerned about.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the survey results for which environmental problems people in 3 countries are most concerned about.
The pie chart
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the results of
questionnaire
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a questionnaire
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about the main natural problems that concern citizens in
Zambia
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,
Singapore
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, and Cameroon.
Overall
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, among
given
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three countries
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, concerning
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concerning
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concerns
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about overpopulation were most prominent in
Zambia
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and
Singapore
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,
while
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in Cameroon,
waste
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disposal was identified as the main environmental problem. In
Zambia
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, the lowest reported concerns were pollution and
waste
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disposal, accounting for 14%,
while
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the highest concern was overpopulation at 43%.
Similarly
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, in
Singapore
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, overpopulation was
also
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the most significant issue.
However
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,
waste
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disposal and pollution were slightly higher than in
Zambia
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, at 21% and 16% respectively.
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, in Cameroon,
waste
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disposal emerged as the most significant environmental concern, accounting for nearly half of the total responses at 42%.
In contrast
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, and similar to the patterns observed in
Zambia
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and
Singapore
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, pollution was the least reported issue, making up only 16% of the concerns.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words zambia, singapore, waste with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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