Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classronn teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

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tools are
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, some
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use them and find them
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good resource to
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lead
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some people believe and others don't, from my perspective, I
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that a balanced approach
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some
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send questions in free hours for teachers and get them time to respond, the AI
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than
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The schools and universities can
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them to their
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also
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it
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will
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money because it affordable.
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, the teachers
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less
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mistakes, if we compare them with AI.
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we can't replace all of them because we need them to give the
informations
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information
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and check them constantly.
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the
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the tutor earlier than
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past.
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the
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students
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, whose preferred educational jobs will suffer, because there are no career opportunities available for them. In conclusion, the
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useful
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and has benefits
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we can't replace and depend on it
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time and money for education. The
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will be more comfortable with teachers and contacts
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.

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structure
Plan before you write. Start with a clear view, then add two or three ideas with why and how.
thesis
State your view clearly. If you choose a balanced view, say it in the first sentence and restate it at the end.
cohesion
Use simple linking words for order: first, also, but, and then, finally.
content
Give more exact examples. For example, name a tool and show how it helps a class.
language
Check grammar and spelling. Use short, simple sentences to avoid errors.
content
The essay shows some ideas of not to replace teachers with tech.
structure
Conclusion gives a warning not to rely on tech alone.
cohesion
The 'on the other hand' idea links show contrast.

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