Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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commonly argued that colleges should
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the same
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number
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of
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and
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students
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in every
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. Personally, I tend to strongly oppose
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statement for a variety of reasons.
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, individuals have different
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forcing them
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a
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category
of a subject is a
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suppression
of curiosity.
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and
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tend to have
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opposite
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and
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in choosing majors and minors.
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, a report from BBC has surveyed 100 people mixed in
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categories
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trend among
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business and engineering
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, whearas
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whereas
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nursing and teaching as a major is very common.
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, it is important to consider the contrast between
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in their personal
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and
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.
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, not every subject
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appealing to
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one as stated above
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due to
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personal valuation, so to
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number of applicants will be near impossible. Every subject has thousands of attendees every year, making the gender estimation
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useless.
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, a university can not
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many good male
student
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students
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to admit more
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just because of the imbalance in
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, which is obnoxious. As a
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many
university
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universities
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still have
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gender imbalance
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it
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.
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, it is crucial to have a look
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many factors
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the deciding process of students
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just their biological gender. In conclusion, the statement
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that universities should have
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in
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in subjects, for
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is absurd
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because
nothing is flawless and having more male or female students in faculties
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indubitably nothing to be concerned
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.

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Use simple and clear language. Check spelling and word form so ideas are easy to read.
content
Add more real and clear examples to back each point. Explain how each point makes you disagree.
stance
You take a clear stance against the idea.
structure
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content
Some reasons are given to show your view.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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