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Countries should restrict foreign companies from opening offices and factories in order to protect local business. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

Pexion
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 offers a different, more measured form of relief. It acts as a
low affinity
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 partial agonist at the
benzodiazepines
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benzodiazepine
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 site
if
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 the GABA (A) receptor, working with the brain’s own calming system rather than overwhelming it. For the prescriber, it’s a reliable choice for the predictable noise events,
such
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 as annual fireworks or local festivals. Clinical studies show that twice as many dogs improved on
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 compared with the placebo, and many returned to
near -normal
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behavior
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 within days. The standard dose (30mg/kg) twice daily, starting two days before the expected event, provides steady, even coverage through the period of stress. Side effects are usually gentle and short-lived, mild ataxia, increased appetite, or sleepiness, which
resolves
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 as the dog adjusts. Unlike classic benzodiazepines,
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 does not trigger dependency or sudden rebound anxiety, making it particularly suited for repeated seasonal use. To the owner, I would describe
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 as a planned-ahead calming course. It’s given twice a day, ideally twelve hours apart, with or without food. Start two days before the fireworks and continue until they’re over. The change is gradual but reassuring, the dog becomes more settled
sand
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 less reactive,
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 still alert enough to interact normally. If you notice wobbliness, excessive sleepiness, or any change that feels unusual, pause the medication and contact your vet. For dogs who face weeks of summer storms or unpredictable loud events, your vet may suggest continuing
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 at a tailored dose for the season, adjusting slowly for comfort and safety.

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structure
Add a short intro and a small ending to show what you want to say.
coherence
Link ideas a bit more and make one idea in each paragraph.
language
Fix small errors like 'sand' for 'and' and steer clear of odd phrasing.
content
Give more facts or numbers to back claims where you can.
usage
Clear steps on how to take the medicine.
content
Specific dose and how long to use it.
safety
Notes on what to watch for and when to call a vet.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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