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Some people think travelling abroad band is a valuable experience for young people. Others think it wastes too much time and expense. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

If the fear is predictable, like a fireworks night circled on
calendar
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the calendar
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, I would choose Pexion. Its twice-daily rhythm builds a calm baseline, preventing the cascade of panic before it begins. It Feels proactive, creating a sense of
protecting
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 before the fear ever reaches the dog’s CNS. But for sudden, unpredictable noise, Sileo is the right choice. It acts quickly, is easily repeated as storms roll in, and allows the dog to remain conscious and connected rather than distant or groggy. In regions where thunderstorms are frequent, a blended approach makes
senses
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sense
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; Pexion for the steady control
though
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through
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 the storm season, with Sileo on hand for acute moments when anxiety breaks through.

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task response
Task must show both sides and give your own view. Here you should say what each side thinks and then give your view.
planning
Add a plan before you write. Put two clear ideas in each part; show why they are true with one or two small examples.
language
Use simple words and short sentences. This helps a clear mind.
cohesion
Link ideas with neat words like 'also', 'but', 'for example', 'in conclusion'.
content
Clear idea about choosing meds.
structure
Shows order and plan in the text.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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