The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annualincome in 2007,2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annualincome in 2007,2011 and 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annualincome in 2007,2011 and 2015.
The bar chart compares the
number
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of households sorted by annual
income
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in the US in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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, by
2015
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2015,
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the US household
income
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distribution became more
polarized
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polarised
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, with the highest-
income
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group extending its lead
while
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the lowest two categories moved in lockstep and the middle bands stagnated. In 2007, there were nearly 30
million
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households that had an
income
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of more than $100000 per year
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the
number
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of those
family
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families
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dropped slightly to around 28
million
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in 2011 before increasing to roughly 34
million
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in 2015. Meanwhile, the
number
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of
family
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families
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which earned between $75000 and $99999 remained lower than 15
million
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, the tiniest figure
showed
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shown
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on the chart, from 2007 to 2015. In terms of other
income
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level
bracket
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brackets
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, it was notable that the modest
income
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household
number
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levelled off around 20
million
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.
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the less than $25000 with 25
million
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bands households and $25000-$49999 bands with around 27
million
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both grew to nearly 30
million
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between 2017 and 2011
and
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, and
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then
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slipped back to a lower level by 2015.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, income, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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