The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
The given bar chart compares the proportion of males and females who passed their driving test in an Asian country over a 30-year period, from 1980 to 2010.
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it is clear that
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the pass rate for both genders increased throughout the period.
However
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, women consistently outperformed men in all four recorded years. Looking first at female candidates, the proportion of women who passed their driving test stood at around 47% in 1980, before rising slightly to 53% in 1990. Over the following decade, the figure rose sharply by 14 percentage points, reaching a peak of approximately 68% in 2000. By 2010,
however
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, there was a slight decline to around 64%. Turning to the male candidates, the pass rate started much lower, at 28% in 1980.
This
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figure increased modestly to 37% in 1990, and
then
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continued to climb steadily, reaching just under 50% by 2000. The same upward pattern persisted into 2010, when the rate remained slightly below the halfway mark.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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