The chart below shows the percentage of different types of hlusehold waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the percentage of different types of hlusehold waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage of different types of hlusehold waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph gives information about how much different types of household waste were recycled in one city from 1992 to 2002.
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, in the time period most growth
shown
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in recycled glass,
while
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the
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plastic
has
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had
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the lowest percentage. Regarding
,
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the percentage of recycled plastic, in 1992, it was about 11%.
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However
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in 1997 and 2002 it increased
steadly
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steadily
to around 13% and stayed stable. In terms of cans, it was approximately 18% in 1992.
Then
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,
this
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trend declined slightly to about 14% in 1997, and rose rapidly to around 24%.
By contrast
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, 15% paper was
reycled
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recycled
in 1992.
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, it experienced a fast growth to 31% in 1997 and to just under 40% in 2002. Regarding the percentage of recycled glass, in 1992, it was about 15%.
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,
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trend climbed gradually
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to around 30% in 1997 and 50% in 2002, respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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