The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Write the essay in 150 words.

The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Write the essay in 150 words.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Write the essay in 150 words.
The two maps illustrate the transformation of Stockford City between 1986 and the present day.
Overall
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, the area has undergone substantial urbanisation, with agricultural land and commercial premises being replaced by residential housing to accommodate population growth. In 1986, large farmlands dominated the northeastern and southern parts of Stockford, with the southern farmland extending to the River Stoke. These areas have since been entirely converted into housing estates, with numerous residential properties now lining the riverbank and surrounding the post office. The city centre, situated east of the river, previously contained two shops alongside a post office.
While
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the post office remains operational, both shops have been demolished to make way for additional housing.
Similarly
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, the large house with its garden in the southeastern corner has been repurposed as a retirement home. The primary school in the eastern area represents the only structure to retain its original function, though it has been expanded to serve the growing residential population.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • map
  • city
  • 1986
  • now
  • show
  • change
  • grow
  • build
  • road
  • house
  • shop
  • center
  • field
  • farm
  • park
  • river
  • walk
  • land
  • old
  • new
  • more
  • less
  • time
  • area
  • left
  • edge
  • near
  • far
  • space
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