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Nowadays it is possible to use computers and mobile phones for automatic language translation, and there is no need for human translators and interpreters. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no denying the fact that learning languages can help people with their life ,
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 it is commonly held belief that using mobile for automatic
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better to ask human translators for help.
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 of view and share my opinion. On the one hand.
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 to visit.
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 now are more easier than before to use mobile and computer for learning
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 there is no reason not to go for it.
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an app
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 where you can learn and ask for help
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assignments
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easier.
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there is no easy
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.I tend to believe that .
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 is helpful learning
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structure
Plan your essay: say your view in the intro, then give two reasons with a short example. End with a short closing line.
language
Use simple and clear words. Use a dot for each thought. Use 'and','but','so' to join ideas.
grammar
Check spelling and use short sentences. Start each new idea in a new paragraph.
content
Some ideas are clear and the topic is seen.
content
There is an attempt to discuss both sides of the issue.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • automatic language translation
  • human translators
  • interpreters
  • cultural context
  • nuanced
  • linguistic subtleties
  • misunderstandings
  • real-time adaptation
  • over-dependence
  • language learning
  • precision
  • confidentiality
  • professional fields
  • legal translation
  • medical translation
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