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The table and chart provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount of money spent by students per week while studying abroad in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The table and chart provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount of money spent by students per week while studying abroad in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and chart provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount of money spent by students per week while studying abroad in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The table and chart provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount of money spent by students per week while studying abroad in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the
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The
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 bar chart and the table illustrate the complete expenditure and the
whole
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total
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consuming
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consumption
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 of coins in the week for students
that
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who
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 complete their education internationally
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overall
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Overall
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according
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, according
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 to the
table
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table,
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 the country
a
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A
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 is the most expensive
with
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, with
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 consuming 875$ and
the
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apply
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homey d
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Homey D
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 is the cheapest
with
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, with
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 435$ but in the second
arrangment
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arrangement
 is the
country
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Country
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 b
then
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 the c
the
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The
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 graph shows that in the first three
countries
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countries,
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 the living cost was the highest proportion
but
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, but
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 in the fourth
one
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one,
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 the
tution
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tuition
 was the highest
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,
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but in the four
homeys
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homes
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the
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, the
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 accommodation was the least
cost
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costly
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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