The graph shows average annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows average annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows average annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph outlines the average annual expenditure
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cell
phone
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and residential
phone
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services between the years 2001 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is visible that the popularity of personal cellphones had a steady upward trajectory.
However
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, residential phones slowly lost their appeal and did not seem to be keeping up with cell
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service expenditure. In 2001, landlines were at their peak of adoption , and the annual bill was close to $700. Cellphones,
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, were at their lowest point , with just $200.
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there was a slow decline in the following years for residential
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services.
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, cellphone service billing was on the rise. The expenditure matched in 2006, with both bills being approximately $550.
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contrast, mobile phones experienced a monumental growth with expenses reaching as high as $650 in 2008. 
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forward momentum continued with a record peak of $750 in the year 2010. Telephones, in the meantime, lost their dominant position and had an annual billing of $500 in 2008, and a record low in 2010 at just $400.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words phone with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average
  • expenditure
  • cell phone
  • residential phone
  • services
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • spending
  • surpassed
  • gap
  • preferences
  • shift
  • changes
  • technology
  • usage
  • patterns
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