The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line graph depicts how many products were delivered,
categoried
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categorised
into four means of transport in the UK from 1974 to 2002. On the whole, it is apparent that the number of goods delivered by road, water and pipeline experienced a significant rise,
while
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that come by rail
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unchanged
after a slight fluctuation.
According to
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the graph, in the first year given, there were nearly 80
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million
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tons
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of goods transported by road.
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quantity was
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the highest among the four
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and doubled that for both water and rail in the same year. Meanwhile, the bottom position belonged to
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the pipeline
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with just under 10
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tons
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. After three decades, the quantity of merchandise carried by road saw a
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continuous
climb to approximately 100
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tons
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, still taking the lead. In the meantime, the data for water and pipeline increased moderately to above 60
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and 20
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tons
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respectively,
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which
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the latter
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at the lowest ranking.
In contrast
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, the former for rail, despite a minimal oscillation, remained the same.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tons, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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