The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres.

The table presents the results of a patient satisfaction survey at three health centres across five different aspects, rated on a scale from one to ten.

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, the Peveril Centre made up the highest scores in all categories. Looking in more detail, Peveril did not receive any ratings below 5. Its highest figure was for response to concerns at 9.6, nearly close to an excellent level.

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was followed by booking appointments at 9.1, slightly higher than doctor services at 8.7. The pharmacy achieved the lowest rate at 6.3. As for Marchbank, the doctor’s service obtained the highest result at 8.4,

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the pharmacy again recorded the lowest evaluation at 5.8. Both booking appointments and care of children were rated above 7, at 7.8 and 7.3, respectively. Turning to Longston, the doctor’s service achieved the highest satisfaction at 8, compared with 6.3 for the care of children. Meanwhile, the three remaining aspects got scores below 6, with booking appointments (5.2) marginally higher than the pharmacy (5.1). Response to concerns was rated the poorest, at just 4.3.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres.

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