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The table below shows information about age, average in come per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA.

The table below shows information about age, average in come per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA.
The table compares data on age distribution, average
income
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, and
poverty
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 rates in three American states
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California
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,
Utah
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, and
Florida
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.
Overall
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,
Utah
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 has the youngest population and the lowest
poverty
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 rate,
while
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Florida
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 has the highest proportion of elderly people.
California
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,
on the other hand
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, has the highest average
income
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 per person. In terms of age,
Utah
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 stands out with 28% of its population aged under 18, which is significantly higher than
California
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 (17%) and
Florida
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 (16%).
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, only 8% of
Utah
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’s residents are over 60, compared to 13% in
California
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 and a much higher 23% in
Florida
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, making
Florida
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’s population the oldest among the three states. When looking at
income
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, people in
California
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 earn the most on average, at $23,000 per person, followed by
Florida
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 at $22,000.
Utah
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 has the lowest average
income
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, at $17,000.
However
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, despite its lower
income
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,
Utah
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 has the smallest proportion of people living below the
poverty
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 line (9%),
while
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California
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 has the highest rate of
poverty
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 (16%), and
Florida
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 stands in the middle with 12%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, poverty, california, utah, florida with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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