Some people have decided to reduce the number of times they fly every year or to stop flying altogether. Do you think the environmental benefits of this development outweigh the disadvantages for individuals and businesses? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With growing concern about climate change, some individuals have chosen to reduce or completely stop flying in order to protect the environment.
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has undeniable ecological benefits, it can
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create challenges for individuals and businesses. I believe the environmental advantages justify
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change. Air
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is among the most carbon-intensive forms of transport, contributing significantly to global emissions. Reducing flights lowers greenhouse gas emissions and helps to slow global warming. It
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encourages governments and airlines to invest in greener technologies and alternative transportation,
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as high-speed rail.
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, the disadvantages should not be overlooked. For businesses, particularly those that rely on international
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for meetings or deals, fewer flights may mean longer
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times and higher costs. On a personal level, people may find it harder to visit family abroad or experience different cultures. Even so, many of these drawbacks can be mitigated. The rise of remote work and virtual meetings has reduced the need for business
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.
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, more people are exploring local destinations, supporting domestic tourism
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lowering their environmental footprint. In conclusion,
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there are inconveniences associated with reducing air
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, the long-term benefits for the environment far outweigh them. Choosing to fly less is a responsible decision that contributes to a sustainable future.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reduce
  • benefits
  • environment
  • pollution
  • travel
  • businesses
  • individuals
  • challenges
  • meetings
  • connections
  • effort
  • manage
  • remotely
  • money
  • stress
  • local
  • culture
  • discovering
  • innovative
  • technology
  • ways
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