The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

The pie chart below illustrates the four modes of transport most people use in Edmonton,

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the table exhibits the reasons why these are chosen.

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, the car is the popular choice, representing 45%, and the most common reason for using

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transportation is commuting to work, accounting for 55%.

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, buses and taxis are not usual alternatives, each representing only 10% of the total.

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, the Light Rail Transit is the second-best option in Edmonton, with 35% of the city selecting it. The most unpopular reasons to move around the city are leisure activities and shopping, each reaching only 15% of the graph.

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, taking children to school and business motives have a fairly high percentage, 40% and 45%, respectively. In summary, the car is what most citizens in Edmonton use in their daily lives. The motivation for it is work, followed by business ordeals, and

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taking children to school.

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