The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below illustrate the centre of a town named Islip in the present, and its future plans for development. It is clearly visible that currently the place is underdeveloped

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, the roads in the locality are not well connected throughout the neighbourhood. Housing and countryside areas

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have limited transportation

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options , and people living there have to walk to most

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places on foot.

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,after the development, they will have dual carriageways which will connect the whole town.

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, there will be a bus station and car parking.

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, some shops will be replaced by a shopping centre.

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, there will be new buildings which will accommodate countryside folks. On top of that,parks and pedestrian walking spaces will be created for leisure purposes.

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, the town has a plan to make it more connected

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accommodate everyone in better residences

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making space for urban shops and leisure areas.

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Oct 15, 2025

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