A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. HelShe has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter give details of the course you took at the university ◦ explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply

Dear Sara, I am writing

this

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letter to provide you

information

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with information

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on the

course

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which

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that

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I am

doing

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apply

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currently

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taking, also

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also

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I will

tell

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also tell

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you the basic

neccessitiea

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necessities

that are required for applying

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this

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to this

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course

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. Let me explain

you

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to you

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details

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detail

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firstly

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firstly,

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the

course

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a Masters

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Masters

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Master's

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in regulatory affairs

which

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, which

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is related to

investigation

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the investigation

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of drugs and medical

devices

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devices,

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as we are pretty much

knowledgable

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knowledgeable

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about drugs .Choosing

this

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course

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will streghthen your academic backround, apart from I see that there are multiple opportunities with

this

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course

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to work,

moreover

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university

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give you better information regarding

course

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rather

then

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colleges because the professors of universitiy are calm and helpfull, the unique part of

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university

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is that the library of

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university

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is opened for 24 hours and they provide you the complete free material in free. It is very simple to apply

compare

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to other colleges, you just have to email your transcripts and your

english

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score card. I suggest you

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apply

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apply for

this

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course

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university

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the university

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as soon as

possble

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possible

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Can't wait to hear back. Please let me know if you need any

further

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information. Your's friend Amtul.

amtulxa

Oct 16, 2025

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structure

Make one main idea per paragraph and use a clear topic sentence to guide the reader.

coherence

Break the letter into 2-3 short paragraphs and use linking words to show flow.

greeting and closing

Fix the greeting and closing. Use 'Dear Sara,' at the start and 'Yours,' or 'Best regards,' at the end.

grammar

Check spelling and grammar; simple mistakes can hide good meaning. Use spell check and read aloud.

tone

The letter keeps a friendly tone and shows care for the friend.

content

It gives real details about the course and study help at the university.

content

The message is clear about how to apply.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

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