The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980.

The two maps show the changes made to the Liverton Docks since 1980.

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, Liventon Docks has undergone a dramatic transformation from an industrial port full of ships , warehouses, and cranes into a modern residential and recreational area. Despite these major developments, the

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and its connection to the coast have remained unchanged. In 1980, there were a few cranes and warehouses on each side of the stream. The

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was full of ships without any barriers. Following the renovations, only the stream remains the same place, adding a new flood barrier and bringe in the end of the creek and includes the waterway walk on one side of the

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. On the one part, demolishes education center and kind playground replaces with warehouse .

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, on the other side of the waterway, it constructs hotel and modern apartments. Notably, near to the apartments and

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, there is parking and reminds only one ship museum.

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