The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration shows different stages of producing clothes with bamboo fabric.
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this
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method involves three main stages and nine substages, namely, planting, processing, and knitting, which all rely on eco-friendly approaches. The first stage is planting bamboo in the spring , and
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they are harvested in autumn. In the next stage, they are sent to a factory in order to be processed. Plants are cut into strips,
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strips
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the strips
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are crushed to make liquid pulp. The output is passed through filters which separate long fibres from liquid. In the following
lap
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step
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, water and some chemicals,
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as amine oxide, are added to the liquid with the purpose of producing soft fibres. In the third stage, the fibres are spun to create yarn. The yarns are sent through weaving machines to manufacture fabric. Eventually, fabrics are used as raw material to knit clothes. Now the clothes are ready to
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in the market as sustainable products.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bamboo
  • fabric
  • cloth
  • fiber
  • yarn
  • thread
  • weave
  • knit
  • stages
  • steps
  • process
  • harvest
  • cut
  • crush
  • break
  • fiber
  • spin
  • weave
  • finish
  • wash
  • dye
  • color
  • soft
  • strong
  • material
  • final
  • make
  • from
  • to
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