The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The provided diagrams compare the current and forthcoming layout of the Norbiton industrial complex.

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, Several modifications are planned, the most noticeable being the removal of eight factories and the expansion of sophisticated roads.

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, the number of housing buildings will increase,

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supporting facilities

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as shops, a medical centre, a school and a playground will add to the territory.  Comparing the two maps, the farmland area moved from the north side to the east

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also

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, the whole factorial building will be demolished from the territory

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. Additionally

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additionally

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, in the proposed option of a new constructed road crossing the middle of the river. The western part of the town will build new shopping centres near the roundabout.

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changes include the construction of new roads and various residential facilities. One of them includes a medical centre which is nearby to the anticipated roundabout.

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, eats part of the territory was observed new school building and playground for children.

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Oct 18, 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
development
infrastructure
manufacturing
facilities
transition
planning
commercial
residential
renovation
urban planning
sustainability
environmental impact
local economy
rejuvenation
construction
modernization
accessibility
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In some countries fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to schools to promote their product. Do you think it’s a positive or negative development of children ?

Nowadays many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people like to spend their leisure time with their colleagues, while others prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a good thing to spend leisure time with a colleague?

Traffic jams are a problem for individuals to use roads freely in major cities. What problems does it have for individuals? How individuals can reduce traffic?

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this be solved?