The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I strongly agree with
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everything.
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world
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can to be more successful than others. First of all,
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science
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very
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important
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for humans and their lives.
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in
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Science
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aid
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us to know more and
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us in many things
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education,
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, knowledge and even
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biology helps
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medicine
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also
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the
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technology
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helps to make it faster
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their tools.
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,
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people a lot of benefits.
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, you can book your flight online and book
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dentist
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online.
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the
science
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boost
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the financial
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counties
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their citizens more comfortable.
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education.
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in 2019, the schools and universities
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their studying and
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it easier and
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no one can distance it.
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you can talk with your friends easily now by using
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science
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need
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to understand how to protect ourselves and our ecosystem . In conclusion, from my perspective, without
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valuable. The
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science improving
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countries which it to improve the lives of citizens.
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science
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development
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structure
Plan your text. Start with a short line that says what you think and why.
organization
Make one main idea in each paragraph and write a topic sentence.
grammar
Use simple and correct grammar. Check big errors and fix them.
content
Give clear examples and explain how they show science helps life.
content
You state your view clearly.
structure
You try to use examples from real life.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial role
  • enhancing
  • quality of human life
  • advancements
  • medicine
  • healthcare
  • scientific research
  • solving societal problems
  • improving living standards
  • global issues
  • climate change
  • food scarcity
  • technological advancements
  • limitations
  • negative consequences
  • ethical considerations
  • sustainability
  • environmental preservation
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