The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

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line chart shows information about families how they spent their money weekly in 1968

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in 2018. Firsly, in 1968 they was spent more mostly in everything.

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, food is the highest in both years but 1968 was the higher.

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everything eals were under 10%. Scoundly, in 2018, their spent the most of the income in Leisure more

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food.

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, the expnsives it's different between thim. The crucial thing is the clothing and footware in the past spent more, fuethermore, Persnoal goods

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they spent higher

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2018,

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