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Band 3

university student should be require to wear uniforms to promote disclipline equality to what. do you agree or disagree

In
comtemporary
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contemporary
 society, school uniforms have extended widely around the world,
especailly
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especially
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university
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.
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 some
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 argue that
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 should be a part of an enforcement rule because it
help
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maintian
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maintain
 an
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orderly
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 environment. I strongly believe that the drawbacks of
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 would have an impact on both students and teachers.
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primary
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 reasons against having school attire is the substantial disadvantages it brings to
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 personal expression.To illustrate, in these
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cloths
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is
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are
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 another way to express
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a leaner's
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leaner's
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personalityand
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personality and
 creativity. If academic institutions support
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not only brings benefits for teenagers developing their sense of self but
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 enjoyable
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atmosphere
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. Another reason is the negative impact on time-consuming
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 code rule.
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instead
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teachers
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 are spending their unproductive time on checking
student's
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 uniforms every morning.
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,
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uniform
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 problems can create unnecessary stress for both students and teachers. In conclusion,
althogh
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although
 having a school attire could consume a significant amount of
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 environment, the drawbacks it offers are
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undeniable
. In my opinion, the negative aspect of dress code
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 the positive consequences
beacause
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because
 it could lead lack of
selft expression
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self-expression
 and
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.
Therefore
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, academic institutions should avoid
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from
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rule
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rules
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.

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task response
Say your view clearly in the first line. write 'I disagree' or 'I agree' and stay with that view.
coherence
Have one main idea in each paragraph and start with a clear topic line.
coherence
Finish with a clear end line that sums up the view.
grammar
Check spelling and grammar. Be careful with words like 'dress code' and 'expression'.
coherence
Link ideas with 'and', 'but', 'so' to help flow.
task response
Give a short real example to back up each point.
task response
The writer shows a clear view against uniforms.
coherence
Some idea are in place, and a start is seen.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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