The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
The table compares the data about the average distance in
miles
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in terms of using varied transport in England in a time
period
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of 15 years , from 1985 to 2000.
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, during the
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, usage of a car as a transport was the most popular and had the highest number of
miles
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,
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the distance travelled by taxi had the lowest figure in comparison to others. As the chart shows, in 1985, England residents preferred to travel more by car than by other types of transportation , with 3,199
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per person per year. Obviously, after 15 years, it remained the most favourable type of travelling with 4,806
miles
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.
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, in 1985, local buses had the second-highest length with just 429
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per year, but they experienced a huge drop to 274
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in 2000. In 1985 and 2000, taxis weren’t quite as popular as the type of transportation in that
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, with only 13 and 42
miles
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respectively
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. People
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tried to avoid using bicycles in that
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, with only 51
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in 1985 and 41
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per person
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of the
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.
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, walking on foot had more
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in comparison to long-distance buses. At the beginning,
this
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index was 255
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and slightly declined to 237 in 2000

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words miles, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • car
  • bus
  • train
  • bike
  • walk
  • travel
  • people
  • number
  • part
  • share
  • rate
  • period
  • England
  • 1985
  • 2000
  • rise
  • increase
  • grow
  • go up
  • fall
  • decrease
  • drop
  • go down
  • change
  • trend
  • up
  • down
  • more
  • less
  • big
  • small
  • high
  • low
  • time
  • year
  • period
  • because
  • so
  • and
  • but
  • while
  • with
  • in
  • on
  • by
  • than
  • than
  • than
  • a lot
  • a little
  • over
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