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The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries.

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The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries.
The table illustrates water expenditure for different reasons across 4 countries. Specifically, these countries are Egypt, Saudi Arabia, New Zealand and
Canada
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.
Overall
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, it is evident that the majority of water is used for agriculture in all countries,
whereas
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Canada
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 accounted for a tiny portion.
Instead
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, it outnumbers other states with a huge difference, particularly for domestic usage.
To begin
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 with, domestic usage is similar for each country, representing 8, 10 and 20, respectively;
however
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,
Canada
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 stands out significantly with 20 per cent value.
Similarly
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, it dominates again with 70 per cent in the industry, followed by New Zealand (46) and Saudi Arabia (30).
In contrast
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, Egypt demonstrates the lowest expenditure, constituting only 10.
According to
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 the agriculture, showing the leading items in Egypt at 82, almost double that of New Zealand at 44. In Saudi Arabia,
this
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 category exceeds half, making up 57; meanwhile,
Canada
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 has the smallest value with only 10.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada with synonyms.
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