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The charts below show changes in the proportions of energy produced from different resources in country in 1985 and 2003

The charts below show changes in the proportions of energy produced from different resources in country in 1985 and 2003
The pie charts compare the proportions of energy produced from different sources in 1985 and 2003.
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, in both years, oil was the biggest figure. The proportion of natural gas and coal increased over the years,
while
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 nuclear energy went down. As the graphs show, in 1985, natural gas and coal made up 13% and 8%, respectively. In 2003, both increased to approximately 22%.
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, the rate of renewable energy in the country grew up for 4 times, from 1% to 4%.
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, nuclear power started with 22% and after that sharply dropped to 8%. The same situation was in oil consumption for electricity
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 the figure fell from 52% to 39% in just 18 years. Compared to others , hydro power didn't change over the period and sustained 4%.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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