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The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The first table illustrates how the
population
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 of New York City changed over the 200 years before 2000. The next two tables compare the percentage of
population
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 growth in
Manhattan
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 with other
districts
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 during that period.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there was a significant growth in
population
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 during that time, and other
districts
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 have the largest proportion
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population
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 growth. In 1800, the total
population
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 of New York City was more than 70,000. About 70% of the
population
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 in
Manhattan
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, and around 25% of the
population
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, was reported to live in other
districts
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.
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, the
population
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 displayed an impressive increase in the next 100 years. There were approximately 3,000,000 residents in New York in 1900, which rose in
Manhattan
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 and other
districts
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 around 50% and 46%, respectively.
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, the number of the
population
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 reached more than 8,000,000 in 2000. It was indicated that around 90% of them lived in
Manhattan
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,
whereas
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 more than 50% of them live in other
districts
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 like Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, and Staten Island. All in all,
it is clear that
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 the
population
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 increased significantly by about 80 times, and
although
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Manhattan
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 had the highest
population
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 among other cities, other areas were more responsible for
this
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 huge rise.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, manhattan, districts with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • people
  • city
  • five
  • district
  • grow
  • growth
  • rise
  • increase
  • increase
  • rise
  • fall
  • decline
  • high
  • low
  • big
  • large
  • small
  • more
  • less
  • over time
  • by year
  • in total
  • compare
  • compared with
  • whereas
  • trend
  • pattern
  • overall
  • feature
  • note
  • point
  • difference
  • lead
  • catch up
  • late
  • early
  • century
  • decade
  • period
  • 2000
  • 1800
  • 1900
  • continuous
  • steady
  • rapid
  • fast
  • slow
  • periods
  • numbers
  • data
  • report
  • describe
  • summarise
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