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In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many modern cities,
people
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 are increasingly allowed to design and construct their own houses or offices with minimal government control.
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this
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 trend encourages creativity and architectural diversity, I believe its disadvantages, particularly the loss of cultural uniformity and urban harmony, outweigh the benefits. One advantage of allowing
people
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 to choose their own house design is that it encourages creativity and personal satisfaction.
People
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 can build homes that show their own taste and lifestyle.
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, some families may want modern houses with big windows,
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 others prefer traditional styles.
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 freedom can make citizens feel happier and more comfortable in their living spaces.
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,
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 can
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 attract tourists because of
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 and interesting buildings.
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, there are several disadvantages to
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 trend.
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when everyone builds in different styles, the city may lose its traditional beauty and cultural identity. Streets can look messy and
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.
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without proper control, some buildings might not follow safety standards, which can be dangerous in the future.
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, poorly planned constructions may cause problems during natural disasters like earthquakes or floods. In conclusion,
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 designing freely can make
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 more creative and satisfied, I believe that too much freedom in construction brings more disadvantages,
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 as safety risks and the loss of cultural harmony.
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, the government should still have some control over building design.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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