the chart below shows the changes in three different areas of cime in manchester city center from 2003-2012.

the chart below shows the changes in three different areas of cime in manchester city center from 2003-2012.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the chart below shows the changes in three different areas of cime in manchester city center from 2003-2012.
The line graph illustrates the trends in three types of criminal activities
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burglary
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: burglary
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,
car
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theft
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, and robbery
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2003 to 2012.
Overall
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,
burglary
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accounted for the highest level of crime at the beginning of the period,
while
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car
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theft
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became the most common crime by the end. Robbery,
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, remained the least frequent throughout the period. In 2003,
burglary
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reached its peak at approximately 3,700 incidents.
After
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this
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, it underwent a dramatic decline, being overtaken by
car
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theft
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in 2008 when it fell to around 1,100. It
then
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rose slightly and
stabilized
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towards the end. Meanwhile, robbery stayed relatively constant, with only a slight rise between 2003 and 2005.
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car
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theft
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started at around 2,700 cases and showed a steady upward trend, surpassing
burglary
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by the final year to become the most reported crime in 2012.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words burglary, car, theft with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • significant
  • fluctuating
  • anomalies
  • external factors
  • economic fluctuation
  • law enforcement strategies
  • societal changes
  • speculation
  • impact
  • data collection
  • reliability
  • interpretation
  • measures
  • strategies
  • broader implications
  • development
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