The key to solving environmental problems is simple: present generations must have a less comfortable life for the sake of future generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

THERE IS NO DENYING THE FACT THAT

WHEATHER

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WEATHER

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CLIMATES

HAS

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HAVE

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CHANGED A LOT COMPARED TO THE

LAST

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10 YEARS, WHICH IS A

COSEQUENCEOF

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CONSEQUENCE

OUR

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OF OUR

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HAUMAN

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HUMAN

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BEHAVIOUR.

WHILE

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IT IS A COMMONLY HELD BELIEF THAT THE KEY TO

SOLVE

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SOLVING

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THIS

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ENVIROMENTAL

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ENVIRONMENTAL

ISSUE IS STRAIGHTFORWARD, THERE IS

ALSO

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AN ARGUMENT THAT OPPOSES IT. IN MY OPINION, I CONSIDER THAT

SACRIFICE

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the SACRIFICE

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OF THE CURRENT CREATION WOULD BE THE CORRECT CHOICE TO

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make

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TO BEGIN

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WITH,

CHILDREN

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EDUCATION PLAYS A

SIGINIFICANT

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SIGNIFICANT

ROLE IN PROMOTING THE IMPORTANCE OF

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MOVEMENT.

IN OTHER

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WORDS

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IT IS BETTER TO TEACH THEM AND MAKE THEM CONSCIOUS AT A YOUNG AGE.

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, THEY CAN UNDERSTAND HOW TRULY IT IMPACTS OUR DAILY LIFE.

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, TO BE PART OF VOLUNTEERING IN THE SCHOOL

ENVIROMENTAL PROTICTION

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ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION

PROGRAM. ANOTHER POINT TO CONSIDER, IT IS

EASY

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TO COPE WITH HABITAT PROBLEMS NOWADAYS MORE THAN EVER, THANKS TO THE DEVELOPMENT OF INDUSTRY AND TECHNOLOGY. IT IS

ALSO

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POSSIBLE TO SAY THAT TECHNOLOGY HAS SO FAR SAVED

FROM

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US FROM

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MANY POTENTIAL RISKS ON OUR PLANET.

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PEOPLE

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ADDICTION TO THEIR PHONE DEVISES CAN EASILY LEAD TO A REVOLUTION TO LOOK FOR

NATURE SOLUTIONS

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INSTANCE

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A VERY POPULAR SOCIAL MEDIA INFLUENCER CAN CONVINCE THEIR FOLLOWERS TO TAKE CARE OF THE EARTH. IN CONCLUSION,

DISPITE

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DESPITE

PEOPLE HAVING DIFFERENT VIEWS, I

BELIVE

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THAT WE NEED TO TAKE CARE OF OUR PLANET NOW MORE THAN ANT OTHER TIME AND THE KEY TO DO

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IS TO WORK HAND

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HAND, TOGETHER, AND FEEL THE RESPONSIBILITY THAT

GIVEN

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IS GIVEN

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TO US.

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Your essay shows you know the topic and have some ideas. But many spelling and grammar errors make the writing hard to read. Try to use short, clear sentences and one idea per paragraph.

structure

Plan what you will say. Start with a clear sentence of your view in the intro. In each paragraph, give one main idea, then a short example or reason, then end with a small line that links to the next part.

grammar

Watch spellings and word form. Use common words. Check 'environment', 'solution', 'future'. Keep tense and subject-verb form steady.

content

Make your point clear and keep to it. Do not mix many ideas that do not support your main view.

idea

You show a clear view on the topic.

content

You give examples that relate to your idea.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

251 words

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