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Marryland is a village near Tokyo. Since the 1970s, the village's population has increased exponentially. The map below shows the village's development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Marryland is a village near Tokyo. Since the 1970s, the village's population has increased exponentially. The map below shows the village's development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates how
Marryland
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Maryland
village
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, which is near Tokyo, has developed from 1970 to 2010. Over the period, it is readily apparent that the
Marryland
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Maryland
village
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 has witnessed considerable changes that increased its size over the years.
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, a number of new facilities have been built. In 1979, the
village
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 had only
two
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 parallel main
roads
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, and a small area built in the south-east. From 1975 to 1980,
two
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 more small
areas
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 were constructed beside
two
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 main
roads
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 in the west and east, respectively. From 1980 to 1999, a highway was built and located in the south of the
village
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,
while
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two
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 more
areas
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 were built and stood in the middle of the
two
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 main
roads
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. Significant changes happened between 1999 to 2010.
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 a railway was built across
two
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 main
roads
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 in the north of the
village
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 with a station, 4
areas
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 were constructed. One of the
areas
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 built in the southwest of the
village
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 is the biggest area among others. Over 40 years, the
village
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 was expanded and modernised, as
two
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 entertainment facilities were opened, including the stadium and football pitch.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, two, roads, areas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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