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Nowadays most of the people prefer using keyboard for their assignments and they are not used pen or pencil. Discuss the both points give your opinion

Well
as
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, as
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know
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know,
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 some
people
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 are more comfortable using
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keyboard
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a keyboard
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 rather than a
pen
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 or
pencil
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. Some
people
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 focus more
with
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on
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 keyboards,and do better than
the
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those
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one
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who
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using
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use
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 a
pencil
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. If you are doing an assignment
in
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on
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you're
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your're
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 pc and you meet some difficulties, you would go to
ai
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AI
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 and ask him for help and copy what you are looking for.
While
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people
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 using
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pen
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a pen
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 or
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pencil
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a pencil
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cant
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can't
 copy
;
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,
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 and have to write it
in
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by
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 hand. The advantages of using a
keyboard
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is
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are
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, We
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that we
 all know
its
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it's
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 a lot faster, and
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it help's
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help's
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helps
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 you save a lot of time compared to
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pen
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a pen
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 or
pencil
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. And if you have more than 1 assignment
;
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,
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 you can
multi task
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multitask
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by
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with
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 the help of
ai
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AI.
,
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apply
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Yes
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Yes,
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 it's more expensive
but
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, but
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 it doesn't run out,
And
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and
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 you'll have to go back to the store and buy more. If you do the
calculations
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calculations,
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 a
pen
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 or
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pencil's
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pencil
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 is more expensive than
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keyboard
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a keyboard
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 in the long term,
Which
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which
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save's
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saves
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 you money. The advantages of using a
pen
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 or
pencil
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is
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are
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,
people
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 are far more creative and think a lot during an assignment. And you can do it anywhere you like, which is very
helpfull
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helpful
 to some
people
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. And you
dont
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don't
 need to stare at
an
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a
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 screen for a long time, which is
more
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apply
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healthier for
you
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your
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eye's
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eyes
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.
Me personally
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Personally
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, I would prefer the
keyboard
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beacuse
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because
,
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apply
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Tecnology
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technology
 is advancing
so
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, so
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 sooner or later we'll have to forget about
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pen
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the pen
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 or
pencil
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 your sincerly

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structure
Have a short start and end. Add a small intro and end that say your view.
coherence
Use simple link words like and, but, also to show how ideas go from one to next.
content
Give each point a clear reason and a small example.
language
Check spelling and grammar. Fix mistakes like it's, your, eyes, and the word 'keyboard' is fine but avoid misspellings.
content
The answer shows both views and gives a personal view.
structure
Some ideas are easy to read and clear.
Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • efficiency
  • streamlined
  • editing
  • organizing thoughts
  • digital tools
  • spell check
  • grammar check
  • clarity
  • memory retention
  • cognitive processes
  • creativity
  • fine motor skills
  • tactile satisfaction
  • cognitive development
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