Deforestation is one of the major environmental issues in many countries today. What are the main causes of deforestation? What measures can be taken to reduce its effects

Causes of deforestation mainly come from
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expansion, both small-scale farming and large commercial farms, which clear land for crops and cattle. Logging and wood production, including both legal and illegal timber, lead to forest loss, often with weak control and poor enforcement. Building roads, cities, dams, and other infrastructure opens new areas to clearing and increases demand for land. Economic and social factors
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as poverty, population growth, land tenure problems, and weak laws push people to clear forests for income. Measures to reduce deforestation include stronger laws and enforcement, better land-use planning, and protected areas. Additional measures include sustainable forestry, reforestation/afforestation, agroforestry, and giving local communities other jobs and income.
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, raising awareness, providing alternatives, and international cooperation and funding can help protect forests
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supporting development

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task response
In task response, you cover both parts but not in full depth. Add more detail for each cause and each measure.
structure
Add an intro sentence and a short closing sentence.
content
Provide more clear and real examples or facts to show how things happen.
cohesion
Use simple link words to tie ideas more smoothly, like also, but, and, for example.
organization
Organize into paragraphs: one for causes, one for measures, plus an opening and closing line.
structure
Clear group of causes and measures.
cohesion
Good use of transition 'Finally' to end the list.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • forest
  • land
  • crop
  • farming
  • logging
  • timber
  • road
  • infrastructure
  • dams
  • cities
  • income
  • poverty
  • population
  • tenure
  • laws
  • enforcement
  • ownership
  • sustainable
  • forestry
  • reforestation
  • afforestation
  • agroforestry
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • carbon
  • emissions
  • monitoring
  • education
  • awareness
  • alternative livelihoods
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • certification
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