The diagram shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
In the
diagram
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it is explained how
corn
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is used to produce
ethanol
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fuel with some crucial steps.
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the
corn
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is put into
the storing
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storage
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. After storing the
corn
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, the mill is used for grinding the
corn
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. After that
water
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, water
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is added
and
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it is cooked for 4 hours. After cooking for 4
hours
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the mixture is put into a fermenting machine for 2 days. During
these
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steps, the unfinished mixture is being filtered into liquid and solid by-products.
afterwards
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, the product that has been separated and turned into liquid
ethanol
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,
following
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this
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ethanol
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is purified for 5 hours. At
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point
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the
ethanol
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fuel is done and it is stored
, after
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. After
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some
time
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time,
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the
finalized
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finalised
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product is transferred into
transporting
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transportation
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.
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, the process consists of several clearly defined stages, starting from
corn
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being stored and
grinded
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ground
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and ending with the storing and transportation of the finished product.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words corn, ethanol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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