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Band 2

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineer, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

nowadays
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, there are some
discussion
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discussions
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 about the
prefessionals
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professionals
 belongings.
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 one side,
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several
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 people insist that the country
where
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spent
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 much more money
to
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on
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 parenting them
hava
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has
 the right to keep them
stay
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here. As we know, science has no nation-boundary
but
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scenecists
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scientists
 have their own motherland. The world is unfair ,there are still
the
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gaps
such
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 as
ecomomics
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economics
, education, and so on
bewteen
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between
 countries. As we know, doctors have high salaries in the
U.S.A
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U.S.A.
, but a good doctor who did a really
specia
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special
 training
from
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the
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South Africa and
then
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settle
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 down in the
U.S.A
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U.S.A.
,
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apply
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it
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means
unbalance
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!
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another
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side
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, the world is smaller than past. No matter what happened, everyone has the
free
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freedom
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 to go anywhere he/she
wants
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want
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. A person who could be a
perfessional
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professional
 in one area needs to pay much more effort than others
,
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deserved
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a
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better lives. As far as I am concerned, it depends. At the
begining
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beginning
 of the
trianing
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training
, both of them should have a contract to define everything they may
met
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meet
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 in the future. If the student
need
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needs
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the
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help
no
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, no
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 matter what
kinds
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kind
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 of help
form
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from
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 the country or government, he/she need to pay back.

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content
State your view clearly at the start and at the end. This helps the reader know your position.
content
Explain each idea with a clear point or example. Some thoughts are not easy to see as you want.
structure
Group your ideas in brief blocks. One idea per paragraph. Use linking words to move from one idea to the next.
content
There are good ideas about the topic and some effort to compare sides.
structure
You try to give a final view and a sense of balance.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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