A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear John, I hope you are doing well. I think

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upcoming summer is going to be the best summer ever. I really appreciate your idea to go camping because we have never done that before, and it will be a remarkable memory for everyone. I know you are excited to experience

the

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apply

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camping because we can enjoy

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ourselves as

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much as we want without any distractions. I have an idea about a place near a river where we can go for a swim, do fishing and kayaking.

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, there are some difficulties to face

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camping because we do not have many facilities at the camping site.

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, we have to be well prepared for everything, especially cooking and toileting. I am pretty sure we can manage those kinds of things. I would love to join you in

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exciting adventure. I am eagerly waiting for a quick reply from you. Let us arrange a date as soon as possible

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I’ll start to collect the stuff for the camping. Best regards, Meethi

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Oct 28, 2025

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task

Add more clear reasons why camping is fun and give a simple plan for the trip.

coherence

Make ideas fit together better. Use small links like and, then. Start a new line for a new idea so one idea is in each block.

tone

Nice warm tone and friendly sign off.

content

Clear wish to join and plan the trip.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adventure
serenity
outdoors
refreshing
hustle and bustle
inherent
foster
distractions
cost-effective
unpredictable
wildlife
adequate preparation
physical demands
researching
campsite
lasting memories
mutual interests

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