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The diagram below shows how plastic bottles are recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how plastic bottles are recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pictorial representation illustrates the different steps involved in the recycling of
plastic
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bottles
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. In general, it is a cyclical process, which consists of nine steps, beginning
in
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with
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 the collection of
plastic
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 cans and ending
in
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with
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 the manufacturing of reusable commodities from
it
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them
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. The process is initiated when an individual disposes
a
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of a
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plastic
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 bottle. It is collected by special trucks and transported to
recyclying
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recycling
 centres, where they are sorted. The recyclable
bottles
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 are separated from the non-recyclable ones.
Next,
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these
bottles
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 are crushed in a grinder and washed. The purified
plastic
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 is
then
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 mechanically processed into
plastic
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 pellets.
Subsequently
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, in the later stages, the
plastic
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 pellets are heated to form raw materials.
Finally
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, commercially valuable merchandise,
such
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 as
bottles
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, boxes, fabric, bags and pens,
are
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is
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 made and distributed in the market. In conclusion, the recycling of
plastic
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bottles
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 is an extensive,
time consuming
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time-consuming
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 and heavily mechanised procedure. The main steps can be outlined as
collection
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the collection
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 of
bottles
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, sorting, crushing, purification, pellet formation, heating and making end products.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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