We have witnessed that parents spend ample amount of money on children's parties. Some people believe that it is wastage of money and this trend is getting worse. What do you think about this trend? Do parents have any solution to this issue.
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can not feel their children very well,just think as
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right to hold a party within consideration
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the cost.
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enjoy ourselves
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beer or a cup of tea . where let me dancing like a
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Make your view clear at the start. State if you think spending a lot on parties is good or not.
Use simple links to show how ideas fit. This helps flow.
Give one or two main ideas and give an example for each.
Check grammar and spell words correctly to be clear.
The text tries to talk about cost and why people like parties.
There is some sense of feeling and need to talk about family life.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.