The line graph compares the number of three different types of animals, which are bears, dolphins, and whales, between 1977 and 1990. 
 
Overall
, the rate of bears steadily increased throughout the given period, Linking Words
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 that of dolphins dramatically decreased over the same time. Linking Words
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, the size of Linking Words
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the whales’
whales’
 population fluctuated during the same era.
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whale’
fraction
 of them sharply jumped to 100,000 in 2013. Until 2015, their population slightly grew, before it reached a peak point Check wording
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 below 200,000 in 2016. Change preposition
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However
, there were 150,000 dolphins in 2011, but they experienced a significant decline to below 0.1 million for a year from 2011. As the proportion of them dropped to below fifty thousand again in 2013, Linking Words
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they were almost endangered in 2016. Rephrase
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Moreover
, that of whales went up and down in every single year, and the highest point of it was a hundred thousand in 2013, and the lowest point of it was 50,000 in 2012.Linking Words