The diagram shows
that
the process of recycling plastic bottles from start to Correct word choice
apply
end
.
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Linking Words
Overall
it is evident that the process contains nine stages.
Punctuation problem
Overall,
Firstly
recycling process starts with people who Linking Words
gathers
their recyclable Correct subject-verb agreement
gather
plastics
Fix the agreement mistake
plastic
garbages
. All the gathered Correct subject-verb agreement
garbage
garbages are
Correct subject-verb agreement
garbage is
threw
into the recycling bins. After Wrong verb form
thrown
that
all recycling bins are collected via special trucks that Add a comma
that,
collects
only recycling Correct subject-verb agreement
collect
products
. Use synonyms
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This
special recycling trucks Fix the agreement mistake
These
goes
to the recycling Correct subject-verb agreement
go
center
for Change the spelling
centre
further
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processes
.
In the recycling Replace the word
processing
Change the spelling
centre
center
Add a comma
center,
those
collected Correct determiner usage
the
garbages are
separated manually by humans Correct subject-verb agreement
garbage is
just
sorting with their hands. Punctuation problem
, just
After
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this
separation is completed, all recyclable Linking Words
products
are compressed into blocks for easier crushing. Use synonyms
Moreover
, crushed Linking Words
products
are Use synonyms
washing
inside a pool before starting Wrong verb form
washed
producing
plastic pellets. Wrong verb form
to produce
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This
pellets are heated to shape them into raw materials. Fix the agreement mistake
These
Finally
formed raw materials Linking Words
used
for producing Verb problem
were formed
end
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products
which Use synonyms
namely
new recycled Punctuation problem
namely,
products
.
At the conclusion, Use synonyms
this
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end to
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end-to-end
end
diagram illustrates how each recyclable plastics are converted into new materials and Use synonyms
served
Wrong verb form
serves
to
human use Change preposition
apply
newly
again.Rephrase
apply