The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows
that
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apply
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the process of recycling plastic bottles from start to
end
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.
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Overall
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Overall,
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it is evident that the process contains nine stages.
Firstly
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recycling process starts with people who
gathers
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gather
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their recyclable
plastics
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plastic
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garbages
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garbage
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. All the gathered
garbages are
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garbage is
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threw
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thrown
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into the recycling bins. After
that
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that,
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all recycling bins are collected via special trucks that
collects
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collect
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only recycling
products
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.
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This
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These
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special recycling trucks
goes
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go
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to the recycling
center
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centre
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for
further
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processes
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processing
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. In the recycling
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centre
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center
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center,
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those
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the
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collected
garbages are
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garbage is
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separated manually by humans
just
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, just
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sorting with their hands.
After
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this
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separation is completed, all recyclable
products
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are compressed into blocks for easier crushing.
Moreover
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, crushed
products
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are
washing
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washed
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inside a pool before starting
producing
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to produce
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plastic pellets.
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This
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These
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pellets are heated to shape them into raw materials.
Finally
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formed raw materials
used
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were formed
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for producing
end
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products
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which
namely
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namely,
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new recycled
products
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. At the conclusion,
this
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end to
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end-to-end
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end
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diagram illustrates how each recyclable plastics are converted into new materials and
served
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serves
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to
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apply
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human use
newly
Rephrase
apply
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again.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words end, products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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