Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You do NOT need to write your own addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..................,

Dear neighbours, Hope you are doing well. Regarding the noise you heard yesterday, and the
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that I got from your side. You are absolutely right. The noise from neighbours
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totally
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disturbing
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lives. Your kids were hearing shouting and some ugly words.
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yesterday was an extremely bad day for my family because there was a personal problem
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my family, and my kids were crying all the
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,
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I love my family, but as you know, problems happen in
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families, and it took me too much
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from my side to calm the people down.
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, after two hours, I have solved the issue. I would like to apologise for what happened. I will make sure next
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, you will not hear any noise from our house. Keeping in
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mind our lovely
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as
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neighbours
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. Thanks for understanding. Best Regards, Shadi

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language
Use short, clear words.
structure
Put one idea in each part and use a simple order: reason, sorry, plan.
content
Be exact about what you will do next time to stop the noise.
tone
Polite tone.
content
Clear apology.
form
Good greeting and closing.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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