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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph and the pie chart provide key information on how
location
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 of
dance
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classes
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 and the type of
dance
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classes
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. The units are shown in percentages and ages . The bar graph includes four locations
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 community halls ,other private
studios
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, school halls and college-based
studios
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.
Overall
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, private
studios
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 are the highest percentage in the
dance
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classes
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location
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,
while
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 ballet and modern are the lowest types of
dance
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classes
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 in all periods. On the one hand, in terms of changes in the
location
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 of
dance
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classes
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, it is clear from the bar chart, private
studios
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 are the highest
location
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 at almost 50%,
while
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 college-based
studios
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 are the lowest
location
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 at about 10%.
On the other hand
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, in terms of changes in types of
dance
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classes
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 by age group,
according to
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 the given data, under 11, ballet has the highest number of students at almost 600,
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 the lowest number of students is in modern , from 11 to 16 years old , at almost 500

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words location, dance, classes, studios with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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