The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates data on the United Kingdom's acid rain emissions from four categories from 1990 to 2007.
Overall
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, the electricity, gas, and water supply has fallen over the period.
Moreover
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, the other industries decrease steadily. Both transport and domestic fluctuated in the same period;
however
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, in 2001, they diverged from each other. To add, the peak of the acid rain emissions was in 1991 in the electricity, gas, and water supply. In 1991, the electricity had declined from approximately 3.5 to 0.5 throughout the period.
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, other industries were around 2 million tonnes in and remained the same till 1993,
then
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they decreased in a small way until 2005 it reaching less than 1.5 and staying at the same level. Transport and communication started with around 0.5 million tonnes, and it stayed steady till 2003, doubling to reach 1 million
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The domestic was 0.5, and remained at the same level till 1995, it dropped slightly
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continued to fall.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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