The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
The visual data shows the percentage of houses acquired and charted in the United Kingdom in 1991 and 2007 based on subjects like
home
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ownership
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, social renting, private renting, and social housing.
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Also
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the total number of homes, 22 million in 1991 and 27 million in 2007.
Overall
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, the two diagrams show different rates across different years, with the clear trend between the pie charts being the ranking positions in which every social subject remained stable, but with some differentiations in percentages for
home
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ownership
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at the expense of social renting and social housing .
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, observing the
home
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ownership
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rates between 1991 and
2007
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2007,
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we can see the growth by ten
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percent
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per cent
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, from 60% to 70%.
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was determined by the downgrades of social renting and social housing
which
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, which
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fell by six and four percentage points from 1991 to 2007.
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, social renting fell marginally by six
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percent
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per cent
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, resembling the biggest downfall of every participant.
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contrast
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private renting remained the same at eleven
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percent
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per cent
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in both of the pie charts as all the other values changed, and social housing
has
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had
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fallen to two
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percent
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per cent
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in 2007 from six which resembled it in 1991. In conclusion, both of the diagrams show different values across 1991 and 2007 on four subjects
:
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:
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home
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ownership
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, social renting, social housing and private renting. Private renting was the only sector which maintained the same number,
home
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owners grew by ten
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percent
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per cent
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and
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, and
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the two other
ones
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sectors
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decreased by a total of ten
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percent
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per cent
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between 1991 and 2007.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words home, ownership, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • owned
  • rented
  • housing
  • show
  • decreased
  • increased
  • shift
  • trend
  • years
  • common
  • prices
  • economic
  • changes
  • people
  • homes
  • compared
  • specific
  • features
  • main
  • information
  • around
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