The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps below illustrate
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Happy Valley Shopping
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has changed over a 30-year period, between 1982 and 2012.
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, the shopping centre underwent significant
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modernisation
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and redevelopment, with several leisure and service facilities added,
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some older areas
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as the lake and the residential
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were removed to make way for commercial expansion. In 1982, the shopping centre had a simple layout, with a lake in the east and a coffee shop in the northwest. By 2012, the lake was replaced by a large furniture store, and the coffee shop was removed,
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an adjoining food store moved to the southeast corner. Sports and electronics shops occupied their previous locations along the northern area, and a cluster of themed eateries appeared along the eastern side, replacing other retail units.
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, on the west, the campaign area was cleared to create a larger central amusement zone. Outside, a road leading to the entrance was removed and replaced by a spacious car park,
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the main entrance and surrounding trees largely remained unchanged.

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