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The chart shows the Japan's population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.

The chart shows the Japan's population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.
The provided line graph depicts the information about the population growth in three different age groups in Japan , from 1960 and anticipation to 2040.The data is measured in percentages.
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,the rate of
the
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individuals who are 25-64 will remain dominant , despite undergoing a slight fall.In the initial year 65 and over
age-group
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 made up the lowest percentages
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however
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,it is projected to surpass the 0-14
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citizens
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. Specifically,
middle aged
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 people showed the highest rate at the start of the period, representing around 65% .
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 was followed by a marginal
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 until 1970,accounting for 70%.After staying almost stable for 30 years , it is expected to descend to about 55%.Yet , in the next
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 there is a forecast of rising and reaching nearly 60 %. Turning to the elderly, it constituted the smallest share in 1960, with 5% .
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 indication did not change for a decade,
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, it began to rise and is predicted to overtake the youngest age group, accounting for approximately 35 % .
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 , 0-14 aged citizens ranked 30 % , followed by a steady drop with fluctuations until 2000 , constituting 20 % .The index is expected to witness a gradual fall to the end of the span, making up 10 %.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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