The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides key information about the three countries with the highest number of people. The units are measured in terms of numbers of individuals, percentages, and
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.
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, it is clear from the graph that China had the
biggest
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largest
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number of people among all the countries.
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, the highest
increase rate of
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rate of increase
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population
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was for India,
whereas
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China had the lowest.
According to
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what is shown,
China
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China's
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population
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accounted
1,415
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billion, with 42%
population
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in rural areas.
USA
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The USA
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population
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represented the lowest at 327 million, and
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urban individuals were the
biggest
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largest
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by 83%. India's
population
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rate accounted for 1.11%
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furthermore
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India was the largest in terms of density,
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in land area represented the smallest with just 2,973 million.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population growth
  • age distribution
  • urbanization
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • healthcare accessibility
  • literacy rate
  • educational attainment
  • demographic trends
  • comparative analysis
  • socio-economic factors
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